I loved this part :

Why i don't know, your voice makes me weak when you speak, your touch makes it hard to breathe, you just being around makes it hard to live.

It was beautiful! This poem was a great read! Keep up the fantastic writting!

5/5
Chan
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Very strong and great write me love alot

laura

This poem waz written for a certain person. Every feeling I had i put it all on paper when i say their name.

I REALLY LIKE THIS... BEAUTIFUL WRITTEN. I AM GLAD YOU AND YOUR MAN IN RELATIONSHIP, TREATING EACH OTHER RIGHT. READING YOUR POEMS FEELS SO REAL AS THE WAY I FEEL RELATED. MOSTLY IT'S EVERYTHING. KEEP IT UP GIRL! 10/10 _Nessy