Guys, I truely loved this poem. I found it to be really sweet holding such emotions which you both portrayed beautifully to form such a great poem, with a unique and creative idea. The first line of each stanza was interesting I loved how you set it up and it got counted down. Also the ryhme was great, simple yet so effective. Well done guys you have worked well together on this one. ~mel

Wow! thats really good. the rhythem and flow is perfect. both of you did a wonderful job writing this! 5/5

xo kisses xo

The flow was nice here..It was written so good...You both did an excellent job in writting this....5/5...

This poem was beautiful!!!!

I definetly liked these lines the best v

30 seconds till your kiss
These things are running through my mind
I'm not ready to let go
And leave these memories behind

But the rest was ((amazing)) too!
Beautiful flow.~
Great word choice~
LOVED IT!! :D:D

Loved it the flow was great i love how it counted down the time emotion was good really great you two 5/5

Aw i love this poem i think you guys did great this is soo sweet its simple and str8 to the point its a great poem keep it up

This is SUCH a beautiful poem girls.. the countdown thing was original and creative, it was refreshing to read a poem that was so beautiful and sad, while not so complicated..I loved it. Good work!! : )

This is a very awesome and interesting poem i like the way it's written especially the countdown stuff

Great poem. both of you, yet plz i found a mistake, you need to put a ' into it.

That doesn't lead to where weve been

we've* thats what you need. i loved how this counted down. and that the ending was so heart aching and sad. don't hold anything in. great message to go with a wonderful poem.

5/5 David

That was very nice. i liked it and it was cool how you counted down the seconds

I really like this. i think it's a great idea with the whole countdown thing. definately a 5/5. keep it up! =]

Wow this poem is excellent!!! i wasn't exspecting it to end the way it did...but when it did it gave me goosebumps:)...you obviously have talent ...not only is your poem unique but it really captures a lot of emotions....well keep up the good work your doing great!! 5/5