by Breeeezie Jun 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Every time i see you |
by CHOKE
Hmm, the beginning didn't really go along with the end in my opinion. maybe you should have made it two seperate poems. anyway keep writing, you'll excel at it in no time. we all have a few things to learn afterall. 4/5 love. |
by Ryan
I enjoyed reading your poem it reminds me of times i went through |