by ImNotPerfect20 Jun 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Why does everything always happen to me? |
by ECILA ice
This is indeed a sad poem and yeah i can somehow feel the emotions but doesn't completely strike my heart.. the simplicty were okay it made the poem more easy to figure out for the readers like me... |
by Fsams
Your depresion is depicted in this piece well. The flow of emotions is very nice and I liked your wordings. Just be brave and be hopeful, things will be ok :) 5/5 all the way |
Depression is a great time to write it helps get things out that you would never think very strong feeling throughout the whole poem good job 5/5 |
This poem is good. and dfeeling depressed ltes me write even better. sound kind of strange but it does. youll find the person you have been waiting for. im waiting for mine too, but it might take a while. |
This poem is very good and deep...i can feel ur emotions pouring over tht poem i lik this line the best |