Perfection

by Kristin   Jun 16, 2007


Wrinkle free clothing
Not one hair out of place
Always pleasing others
And never a disgrace

Doing things for others
Smiling all the time
Never being wrongers
Or committing any crimes

Living everyday like it's our last until the end
Picture perfect smiles making everything okay
Never talking back is what we intend
And making sure we live this way
Until the very end

Doing things for others makes this place a better world
Always making sure we do what we are told
Never regret you willl only forget
Always be kind, it makes for perfect times
And keep a smile on your face
It creates a perfect place

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  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    The flow seems choppy and the rhymes seem forced. Like the content but it's just...the flow really throws it off for me. I like the beginning cuz it had a cool hook but it's just the flow problem where it unraveled for me. I'm not sure but it just seems the last stanza fails with the flow and all. Probably just because I'm picky with the words.
    ~Faith-less