Omfgg !!
This is such an amazing poem !!
It's really goooddd.
This was my favourite line:
Someday you will be my shooting star.

I find it really sweet xD it's a good symbol for love xD 'stars' Well done. Flow was good, I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work!

Aweh, I loved this. It really pulled me in and the ending was a perfect way to end the poem. I`ve never read a lot of your stuff before but I am enjoying it. :]

5.5
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Nice new poetry technequie keep up the good work and i'd love to read more
5
:~)Sam