Shattered Hope

by Dani Ward   Jun 16, 2007


I look fine to you who see me
seems as though all is well
but what you see is not the truth
and I've a short story to tell
care not, do I, what you may think
always doing my own thing
but one person's thought does matter
her approval makes me sing
I try to be a good man
to do that which is right
I try to live as Christ the Lord
to be a shining light
I know I fail in many ways
though succeed I do as well
at times I am that bright light
but at others it's hard to tell
it seemed things were alright
that you and I were fine
we talked each day after school
but I was walking a thin line
one day I dared to ask
to see just what you thought
and great was the pain
when truth was what I sought
though things had seemed so good
so close to you I felt
you see me as a bad person
and to my knees I knelt
how could this be
that you see me in such a way
I know that I am imperfect
but a bad person, you say
shattered were all my hopes
all the dreams of what could be
a future of love between us
forever sealed to fantasy
and so I pretend I'm well
though in truth I'm really not
I pretend I'm fine for your sake
and I hide the pain I bought
©Daniel Lee Ward 12-25-06

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  • 16 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    I love how I kept reading and couldn't get distracted.
    It takes a good poem to do that.
    The flow was so simple that it made it a joy to read, and not a burden.
    Your word use was simple and catching.

    Also it told a story, so good work. :]