The rain falls,
As I get drenched,
Rain soaked my hair my shoulder,
My tears falls,
Just wish you will,
Hold an umbrella,
Let me stand under your umbrella,
Hold me tight and never let go,
Promise me,
I'm the one.
xx
This is also a nice poem. I like this piece coz the message is clear and the words are cohesive. Just correct the line drench. . . as i get drenched. 5/5
