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by Brittney Follett Jun 16, 2007 category : Love, romance / lost love
I gave you my heart, You tore it to shreds. I cried for hours... Now I'm at wits end. I took you back in "Love," But you wanted more. All you wanted was sex, But I wasn't a wh0re. You called me names. You made me want to die. Inside I was hurt. All I did was cry. But you know what? I'm sick of the tears Even though I love you, It's time to face my fears. The fear of being alone. The fear of being sad. The fear of no love... Well that's not so bad. It's better than being With a loser like you. So that day, I stood up, "Jon, we are through." Now you've realized That you screwed yourself. You lost me the day, I stood up for myself. I'm no longer dancing, Outside in the rain. To you sickly sweet tune. I'm basking, in your pain. Sick of your slimy smiles, Sick of our sweet lie. Jon, darling, what is this? Your heart wants to die? Darling, sweets, baby, lover. My life has removed thou. Take a guess "my love" Whose Crying Now. Hey.. kinda hateish.. but Yeah i just got over a 5 month relationship. :) hope you enjoyed Copyright Brittney Follett
by Fsams
I like the way how you have written it and made a good flow. But still there is room for improvement. You are a great poet. tc
by Hope
Love the poem and the way in which you structured it. The contents reminds me of my self.. Keep up the good work