...Unusual. I like that it does have this dark portrayal and all. For some reason I've got the raven stuck in my head and not the 'faerie'. I like the second stanza better than the first. I'm thinking the first has something not as captivating as the second for me. It's pretty good especially with length. It actually fits the shorter length rather than a longer one.
~Faith-less

Excellent. The rhyme scheme is different but it worked perfectly for you. It was trully awesome. One of the best I've ever read. Great work! 5/5