Deterioration

Very good, short and sweet with so many ways to view it, and thank you for the comment

Really good,like the unique style,5/5

As much as tht tuk me break, i loved it just as much.. Superb piece .. no doubt..
loved stanza two.. u really have brought it out in this one . Amazing work , mes amis , Amazing.
Keep it up

~Wake~

Great wording and whole poem has some special tone, I really like it, it adds effective atmosphere on this superb piece.

Hey this is good. I think I understand it. Is this saying that a person mind has now been taken over by the devil? If not that's what i got from it lol. Great job. 5/5
-vino