I love this poem its sweet, soft and meaningful u have a gift. thank u it was wonderful!!!

Wow I dont know why this poem doesn't have more comments. It's wonderful, most people would find it hard to write a poem that it just focusing on the good thigns about themselves. but the fact that you managed to pull it off without sounding conceited, or sarcastic says a lot about your writing ability.

"She's my double rainbow in the sky
my sunshine in the rain
her beauty surpasses all others
by lengths of shooting stars"

wow everything about that stanza was magical. It says so much with so little. AMAZING! I love this poem.