Its best friends that help

by XxFallenxFromxGracexX   Jun 16, 2007


I didn't really no where this poem would fit!! lol

Its when the sky turns dark
And the world has gone to sleep
That I can finally take off this mask
And find the time to weep

Its when no one else is around
That I can scream what I feel
Drop to my knees, on the ground
And try to find something real

Its when the people I love shut the door
And turn their backs on me
That the voices in my head I cant ignore
And the good things I cant seem to see

Its when the smile on the outside breaks
And people start to see my frown
That my heart starts to ache
And I cant help feeling down

Its when everything goes wrong
And nothing goes right
That I realize I'm not strong
And I wonder why I fight

Its the way you smile at me
That makes me smile back
And your laugh so full of glee
You seem to make up for everything I lack

Its you that keeps me living
Its you that chases my fears
Its you that wont stop giving
Its you that catches my tears...

Dedicated to my best friend Nessa!! shes been so good 2 me at the moment nd is helping me get over my depression i love her 2 bits!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    The opening stanza was very strong and grabs the reader and almost forces them to read more, the words are very true as well. Most of us hide our true emotions around the people we know/love and then we let it all out when were alone. You're lucky to have a close friend who cares for you, most people don't. Excellent job 5/5 again GG23. P.S. A little advice with your poetry to help the flow would be to not use "and" so much at the beginning of lines. Just by removing a few of those you'll make the flow a lot better for the reader. Great job though :)

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