Comments : The Night You Killed My Innocence

  • 17 years ago

    by Topshop princess

    **speechless**
    Thats horrible i'm so sorry dear.
    This poem was penned so well, great emotion && sadness,
    Keep it up xx Jess

  • 17 years ago

    by FountainsOfBlood

    ...That HAS to be the most moving poem i have EVER read. I send my best wishes to you. You have real talent! Keep it up.
    Sarah xx

  • 17 years ago

    by katy

    I just read your poem and a tear rolled down my face, you have a great talent for writing poems, i loved your poem it was so good, you keep up the work and carry on and get through all the badness that life has the throw at you cos somewhere along the line something reli good will happen to you, all you hav to do is wait, luv katy xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Its sad. Gd job

  • 17 years ago

    by Katran

    Cool poem. it's good that you could get out your sorrow. i hope you one day feel alive again. keep up the good work, and if you ever need a to talk, or just want tot rant, just send me a message, ok?
    later

  • 17 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    I can relate so well to this poem!!....i was raped wen i was 7 and i have lived with it...without telling anybody untill i was 16 yrs old!....the first person i told was my beautiful man who saw past my fake smile!...he helped me alot
    and now were engaged!
    ever so happy
    keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Jonathan

    Emotional intuned and inthought is an amzment speak more of rythme with it give it flair capture and amzed this was thrilling beseeding in a soul what was you savior`s name i wonder for this i ponder is it jon or is it a gaurdian angel you speak of this i will wonder and ask when we speak again love is a blossom a seed that grows steadily between it can`t shatter but never will it crumble truth is pain and pain is mercy and we still hold strong this is my opinion listen and read well no one take this wrong i know thsi girl she is a breathe of fresh air and a sparkle of joy make her smile or your dealing with me.