Black

by BrokenBrit   Jun 16, 2007


Black is Goth's that are sad and alone.
The emptiness in a broken heart,
Drunks behind jail bars,
Screaming your name.
Black is the smell of bitterness
In mid night skies.
Black is the feeling of worthless
in a tumbling life.
Black is violent, the voices in your head.
Black is the feeling of desperateness.

Black is abductors at your bedside.
The pounding in your ears at a rock concert.
Black is the smell of burnt food on a grill.
The polluted air
over the burning fields.
Black is uptight,
Guilt,
and depressed.
Black is the feeling of all who are suicidal.

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  • 17 years ago

    by rebecca hefferna

    Your work is full of feeling, i myself write alot of dark poetry and its great expression, this is very good, realy grabbed me, bek
    thanks for your feedback on my work x

  • 17 years ago

    by Lyndsy

    I really liked this. So many people see black as just a color. But it is way more than that and you showed that in this poem. I really liked it. good job

  • 17 years ago

    by jewels18

    As you continue with ur writings you will find better ways to express yourself and u did that here keep writing.Remember poems don't have to rhyme! keep writing

  • 17 years ago

    by AnimeGothFreak

    Great poem, loved how you explained the feeling of he color black.

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