Great poem, loved how you explained the feeling of he color black.

As you continue with ur writings you will find better ways to express yourself and u did that here keep writing.Remember poems don't have to rhyme! keep writing

I really liked this. So many people see black as just a color. But it is way more than that and you showed that in this poem. I really liked it. good job

Your work is full of feeling, i myself write alot of dark poetry and its great expression, this is very good, realy grabbed me, bek
thanks for your feedback on my work x