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by Benny Boi Jun 16, 2007 category : Love, romance / desired love
No more can I take it, These feelings I cannot hide, What I feel for you is painful, Being kept up inside, Cant hide it no longer, Have to let this out, Ill poor out my heart, For you just to listen, You are the reason my heart beats so, You make every breath feel heavenly, You take the madness from my life, You induce me with the drive to go on, Your the petals to my bud, The bright sun in my sky, My glistening stars in the night sky, The cool breeze on a summers day, Be mine is what I ask of you, The light in the darkness, Give me my true purpose, Your my number one in life,
by Cindy
Benny Very nice. The feeling of love sing frm this piece. Great Job! Love you Nana
by Alma
I really liked your poem. The words and metaphors you used gave it a nice touch. Very romantic and sweet. 5/5