The sentences in the poem i thin could have bee n better doen this poem was written wonderfully btu ijust get he feeling something is missing good job still 4/5

The change the color of the sunset threw me for a loop but other than that i got it all, nice job

your servant:
atticus

Love it! lol again, beautiful imagery. If i had a love of my life, i'd want to experience this cause it sounds to d*** good not to.
~*~Amber~*~