This unknown place.

by Erick   Jun 16, 2007


Why can't I find the light?
Why do I feel this way?
I feel nothing going right,
I guess it's just another ordinary day.

When I feel down,
Everything falls onto me.
I feel like I'm about to drown,
And there's no one to save me.

No one really knows,
Or even cares.
I'm at my lows,
To help me, no one dares.

I don't see,
Why life took a turn this way.
Everything is against me,
Perfectly the world seemed just yesterday.

Sometimes I just feel flooded,
By all this constant rain.
Running around cluttered,
Feeling like I'm going insane.

I'm really at an unknown place,
And there's no where to hide.
No one following my trace,
Ahead of me everyone that lied.

Thanks for being real,
If that's what it means to be a friend.
I'm still trying to heal,
What you supposedly helped mend.

Plz comment and let me know what you think.. .thanks.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    "When I feel down,
    Everything falls onto me.
    I feel like I'm about to drown,
    And there's no one to save me."

    very well written its great when words speak with their own voice and show the true feeling of the write great job