by Blackrosesavvi Jun 16, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Hidden secrets, flustered past. |
This piece i like the most and its not b/c you put it into stanza's iether. the flow to me is great it really fits the rhyming scheme nice job. incidentally i love the 3rd stanza " Falling behind my secret heart;It feels as through were worlds apart", absolutely filled with emotion. definaitly 5/5 |