I love this poem, it is really amazing. All the stuff you talked about, I was like floating along as I read it:)

Good poem..na! great poem!...you expressed everything in a good structured poem really good...its always nice to see these types of poems

Wow good one very good :):)

iloved it :):))

keep it up:):)

khuloodan:)
smile all the time:)

Great poem, keep it up

LOVVVED IT!!

keep writing!