by Loved In Hell Jun 16, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
I see her there all alone crying screaming |
by Nix
Wow this poem is fantastic, you created amazing atmosphere. It is very dark and the end is effective. I like th wording the most. |
Greatly written dark poem, with haunting imagery. |
by Soraya Lowe
Ooo! I like! I like very much! Very pretty! Very interesting...5/5 Great job! |
by Robert
I was not sure how to react to this poem it had some wonderful images in it and I found myself wanting to take in all, but I can't place my finger on it except to say something was missing and I don't know what Plot121 |
by deathdealer
Break it up into stanzas, otherwise it will sound like a blog entry or a story |