...So it can be directed to so many different people. The wording makes it someone close and by the third stanza the implication is clearer. Words are shown as something effective. Word choice doesn't drag it above something typical but it is a little different. It shows the reason behind certain actions and it does flow rather smoothly.
~Faith-less

THat is sad. ..but you did a good job.

==Lindsey.

A sad piece but very well written.

I liked this piece because it was an obvious portrayal of emotion, my fave lines were:

she needs to sleep
but shes scared to dream

they were really effective.
However my criticism is that it is nothing original and had something quite cliche about it, regardelss it was a good poem, i just felt that i had heard it before (maybe i'd read it before lol)
xxx

I like this.
I can relate to it.

Very well written.
=]
x

Aww its kinda sad... i love it tho... great job!!!
~*~Skye~*~