Wow .. tht poem is realli deep =[
i like ur sense of feelin tho and depth in how youve wrote it keep up the work =] message me if you can would love to get to knw you =] xxx
Sammii3 xx

This poem is so very heart felt i had to hold back a tear. it deserves nothing short of 5/5

Aww Saffie :( gd 1 really liked it. Am sure she,ll neva leave ya hunnie luv ya xxxxxxxx

Aw this is cute <3
<3jess

Aww that is so sad... keep up the good work!!!

Aww that is so sad,,i had a hard time holding back tears,, great job!!5/5
Janaynay

This one left a tear in my eye ,brought back memories form my mum left us for a while.Very brilliantly done.

This poem is realy good. i'm just finished going throuigh this my mom and i are now close again, and i hope the same happens betweenu and urs

Wow! beautiful and emotional.. i loved it

Thats a damm good poem - really beatiful... tnx for the comment bytheway - keep doin your thing :D

Such emotion and love in that poem, I hope you and your mum resolve your differences, mums and daughters can be such good friends. Has your mum read your poem?
Well written

I really really like this one. My mum died wen i was 8...i like ur poems...i can realate.
keep it up!

Wow is poem mead me cry it so upseting good i hope u and ur mum is ok if its was rill oh and thanks for commenting on my poems it means a lot 5/5

jojo88

Beautiful.nearly made me cry.my mum passed from cancer a year and a half ago.hurts.youre a great writer.love beccy.

I really like this. Your really good and writing poems and quotes :) I'm sorry about your mom. Thats awful.

ps- thanks for the comment.

Thanks for the comment :)

i like this poem..its so sad and i hope everythings ok with your mum and you now!
-Jul*

Wow this poem really touched me..it is soo deep and emotional. i really think it's great! very well written. the way you expressed your emotions here is truly terrific!
i'm really sorry about your mom though. and i hope everything turns out ok :)
thanks for the comment on my poem =] and again great job!
all the best --Viola

Saffie,you better stay calm cause your mum will never say Goodbye.I like this poem cause i bet is coming from your heart and is also very deep.You have done a great work,as always.Don't forget:your romanian friend loves you so much <3 <3
Ps: Have good time with your friend and enjoy the time you spend together.I'll miss you*hugs*hugs*

This is a really great poem. :) i feel this way about my mom, even though we get in a lot of fights every now and then, i know she'll always be there for me and me for her.
Ducky

This is really really good. you have talent. 5/5