Hi sorrie nabout you en ya mum it must be hard i really liked the poem very well written my mum en i have never really been close either i try to make things better but it never seems to work i hope you have better luck if you havent already sorted things out any ways keep on writing your poems are brilliant |
That is very sad it made me cry you have amazing talent |
by Hermosa
Oh this is so sweet and sad...I get the same way just by thinking my mama could leave me. thanks for commenting on my poem i really appreciate it. |
by krystal
Amazing completly amazing <333 5/5 |
by jayy x
FUKIN BEAUTIFUL |
by stephanie
Awww thats so sad but i really like it!!!! |
Wow i dont no wa els 2 say its amazin great job |
by Georgia
This is really sad but i really enjoyed reading it |
Very emotional, made me cry, not saying it was meant to but i'm a really cry baby -.- Very beautiful 5/5 |
This poem was so deeply written, i can only say I hope your ok, beautifully written keep it up |
by xxDead in her mind Cold toher bonesShe opened her eyes and saw s
This is a great poem! so sad! |
by fakesmile
Diz poem almost made me cry!! my mom and i alwayz fight over the pettiest things.. itz nice that poets like u would write a poem to your mom..lol! keep up the goodwork! 5/5 |
Amazing poem... you put so much emotion into it and it flows really nicely. Keep smiling, |
Wow this poem is very deep..it touches the heart very deeply. you can really sense the emotion and passion put behind the poem. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Good work and keep it up =] |
by ChaosHarbour
Wow this is really beautiful. my mom and i are starting to slip apart as well, and this really describes how im feeling. wonderful job! |
That is so well written |
by Amber
Awwww sooo sad!!! |
Wow brilliant poem |
by amber
Wow darling....this is really good. Thank you so much for the comment on mine. you have real talent. Keep up the good work and keep writing. Keep me posted on your new writes. :) thanks again |
by ReinaPuente
I love this poem keep up the good work |