AwTz...
iT's sO sAd..
juSt LiKe My sToRy..
:(

..buT yOu aRe gReaT!
thUmbS uP fOR yOu...
kiP iT up...

I can't even explain how much i can relate to this
you are so gifted in writing! i love the style you have its very unique great poem! 5/5 <33

Wow. This is amazing, you just let out my feelings that i am feeling now. This has got to be one of my favorites. You express your feelings very well. I definately could have used this a couple weeks ago when i was like, totally bummed. Anyways... this is a great poem. Good job! =]

Damn i like this poem
its so sad tho =(

Holy, I'm speachless. That was amazing. I don't think I'v ever felt that kind of intensity while reading any other poem. It was dark, painful and perfectly worded. 10/5 If I could lol.

Aw!..this was really sad!!!!!!!!!
good job tho!
Aly

Thats a very touching poem I currently going
thru that situation and it hurts.

Wow i really lik this poem its really deep
i love it

Ververy nice , work , you notice , sad moments take out the best of us , and the words seem to flow from you i can feel them very touching ,
i hope you have much poems then this , one , like this ,

it is a crashing one to my heart

love it

Wow!, very good work, it's very touching, I love all of your poems, you do good work.:) I hope that everything goes right and never quite cause ur just too good for that.xoooooox

This one is touching, the first half i can relate to with my last, recent relationship. i enjoyed this poem it did the trick

Wow, that was amazing.

I can really related to this poam right now,
it made me cry, it was really amazing.

well done

Hey read your poems you wrote to me the other day
my addy is dreamscancometrue7@msn.com if u wanna chat

if u dont remember me im the one whos bf died to xx

Very nce girl .. tnx 4 the comment

Great poem!! nice rhymes and really good flow! i liked it great emotion too!! 5/5

This poem is beyond great.... i've had this happen to me so i no the feeling :(

This poem is basically amazing.
You have so many feelings in the poem and it all fits together perfectly.
I love the last lines
"I just want us to be ok again, so please don't say goodbye" becuase it just ends the poem perfectly and wraps things up with a 'wow!' kinda ending, know what I mean?

Aww, really sad but nicely written. good job. :]

This was a wonderful and touching poem. i loved every line. i couldn't pull away from it. 5/5.

much love,
mac.<3

I love this poem. its emotional && beautiful. i feel the pain and yet love in this. really sweet! 5/5