Baby girl

by Baby Rainbow   Jun 16, 2007


She goes to her room and turns off the light
holding jay jay she climbs into bed tonight
she looks out the window and up at the sky
as a tear slowly drops as she blinks her eye

so many thoughts she keeps locked inside
such a big world but theres no where to hide
lying there crying with no one around
the rain on the window is the only sound

she cant help the feelings of being alone
she's never more scared than in her own home
she cant seem to stop the tears from falling
silently inside its her mummy she is calling

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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    This is really sad. 5/5, Em

  • 17 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This poem was wonderful.How well you have written this.It was sad,emotional and deep.How well you have captured and bestowed here.Good job in this piece.
    All the best and take care.

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx trying to be strong but only just holding onxX

    Its very mystical... it caught my eye i thought that is would end really sadly but it truned out to be good in the end
    great work
    5/5

    keep up the good work
    -Amelia

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    The mystery captures this poem from begining to the end and it was so sad and sorrowful..and you reflected the feeling being alone so amazing on this masterpiece..I liked the story,it blew me away and it was so breathtaking and the flow keeps you going
    It deserves a 5
    Keep it up,
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    Your poem is great, and the flow magnificent.

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