Wow. thats all i can say.. this was an awesome poem.. my fave part had to be..

"The images and faces that never seem to last,
Haunting moments of my unforgettable past."

i thought this was a very well written and thought out poem.
"Every time I close my eyes, I see your face,
Every time I think of you, I fall from grace!"

love that to.. lol anyway i might just read more then the 3 that i told you i would your an awesome poet.

Excellent poem, great flow and wording was wonderful, deep, dark, sad, I am sorry that I ever fell for all your bullshit lies!
But here I am trapped in my own private living hell,
Stuck inside the secrets that I can never tell.
That about said it all for me , great write , keep it up , your friend Tracy dean 5/5

Insatiable demons feasting on my constant pain,
My head hung down, face hidden from the shame
I loved these lines, cause its how I felt after I was sexually abused..Anyway....Wow...I think this is one of the best poems I've read in the Explict Section...I just couldn't stop reading and it was written so beatifully...Keep on writting...Your amazing...

Wow u r like an awsome poet!! and know how to rhyme in ur poems really good...mi lik this part..

I am sorry that I ever fell for all your bullshit lies!
But here I am trapped in my own private living hell

the flow wuz pretty good but it turned out awsome the same =) 5/5

Wow....brilliant...seriously! amazing poem..
flow was amazing! and it had such deep meaning!
it was almost flawless...
only one thing though
"Have been unfulfilled, and unmerciful broken."
maybe if u change unmerciful into unmercifuly
the flow would be better...(in my opinion)

This poem is brilliant,one of the best i've ever read 5/5

Another superb poem from the very versatile Vanessa. I like your wordings and the very appropriate lexis used. The flow is nice and its outstanding. Its worth 5/5 and you got it.

As always I like your style. In this poem you did an excellect job of conveying the emotion of an unfortunate trauma 5/5

I loved the imagery you used, it was very clear and sharp. You had excellent vocabulay, but I think you may have overdone it a bit in some spots. Other than that, nice poem!

"Every fading image, every promise broke,
Every rusted chain, is another twisted joke. "

wow. my favorite lines. such an emotional poem. took my breath away. whew...

Oh, this is another great one. as always you seem to complete your poems in a way in which the readers end up with some tears or some true feelings as your words really really touch them. you are a great writer, keep it up.

Wow.. like just wow!
so intriging(cant spell lol).. such a beautiful poem, lovely style.. couldnt stop reading.. just wonderful
keep up the lovely work
.x

Another amazing poem. I loved the vocabulary you used here. The beginning was very strong, and you kept it up throughout the poem, which makes a poem very good. It was also well written.

5/5.

This is frikken awesome...
The opening is so powerful and gripping, it pulls the reader right in and from there on it just gets better and better.
The flow is flawless throughout and the imagery you portrayed in this created vivid pictures for me.
Beautiful work with this!

Again, great flow and rhyme in this piece. The imagery was fantastic. The emotion was strong and consistant throughout. A very powerful read. 5/5

marcella

This poem left me stunned, Im glad you are able to share this poem with people, the flow of the whole piece was wonderful. I rated it 5/5 I would of done more but couldnt

Take care