Hello, My Name Is Distance.

by Teria   Jun 17, 2007


Hello, My name is distance
I come from far away.
I live within your dreams,
the ones that fade day by day.

I've come to take you back,
back to where you were.
I think I've finally found the
perfect, perfect cure.

You're sitting all alone,
depressed in every way.
just letting your tomorrows
pass by each and every day.

I'm here to make it better,
to bring you back to reality.
You're slipping from the grip
that only I can really see.

You've fallen far behind the rest,
beating around the bush.
Boy, you're doing it all wrong,
I'm here to give you a push.

Hello, My name is distance.
I've come from far away,
I live within your dreams
the ones that fade day by day..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This poem was excellent.
    just love it.

    You've fallen far behind the rest,
    beating around the bush.
    Boy, you're doing it all wrong,
    I'm here to give you a push.

    Hello, My name is distance.
    I've come from far away,
    I live within your dreams
    the ones that fade day by day..

    great stanza.
    best wishes
    and take care.
    emmeline

  • 17 years ago

    by Gypsy

    I loved it. Especially the way the 1st stanza was repeated, it made the poem seem like a circle (if that makes any sense), could really relate to it and yeah, good poem =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Teria, this was another awesome piece. with vocabulary so pure, imagery so vivid.
    again, a lovely piece written by a lovely person.
    Love Tara-Kay
    xx

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