I think that is your best poem! Seriously, it is very sweet and I love the build up. She has a nice name to rhyme with =P

I really like it Wes. Make the third stanza 4 lines like the rest. It looks all lonely just being a 3-liner.

Talk to you later darlinnnggg, xxxxxx

Cute and charming but soo cheesy im sry i knwo you might fel this but who would say that to a gir lno girl woudl ever buy this