It's Too Late

by Raychil   Jun 17, 2007


My veins bleed
The metal burns
My vision hazes
Twists and turns

Arms cut open
Who knows why
Tears will stream
Curses will fly

But that's on the inside
Where no one can see
What is really
Happening to me

Smiles stay strong
Eyes will stay clear
No one gets in
No one gets near

I sink in deeper
Coldness surrounds
Falling until
There is no more sound

My body is numb
My heart has died
I said I was fine
I'm sorry, I lied

So in my secret
Where no one will know
I will give in
I will let go

More scars will form
More lies I'll tell
No one will know
My life is in hell

I tried to tell
Why didn't you understand?
I tried to fight
Where was your hand?

I can not let go
Why weren't you there?
I can not feel
Why didn't you care?

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  • 17 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    Wonderful. I really like the expressions you used, they brought great imagery and emotion. I liked how you started questioning near the end, I think it really brought the poem together as in what was happening to the speaker. Great Job! :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Lozbi

    I love it.. its so good.. i can relate 2 this so much..
    very good writer..
    .x

  • 17 years ago

    by keep breathing

    Wow.. thats really really good, i totally know what your saying you pretty much put all my thoughts in to words
    keep it up
    ~rachel