Comments : You've Destroyed Her

  • 17 years ago

    by Chrissie

    That is soo well written and so realistic...well it obviously did happen which is terrible. The emotion put in it was unbelievable and the flow was perfect. Great work. Xx Chrissie

  • 17 years ago

    by leinhart

    Hei great poem,,,the anger was obvious,,,so sory to hear what hapened, good job still,,

  • 17 years ago

    by malina

    It seems so real...it felt like i was there watching a movie or something...i give it a 100 out of 5..hope to read more of your fantastic poems and sorry to hear about your friend..hope she's okay...

  • *tears*...actually i'm not crying but it was sad enough to bring them...but in the same instance beautiful...i loved it...i loved how it flowed and there wasn't unneeded interuptions...i also loved the story becasue it's something that happens all too often...beatiful work
    Jonda Beth

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    Very well written..
    Completely awed by it.
    I love the first paragraph.
    I hope your friend is okay. =[

  • 17 years ago

    by SweetPinkPrincess

    I like this poem.It has so much sadness.

  • 17 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Omg I love this poem Im sorry for your friend Ya i have that Problem I made How I Wish for a friend. man this is deep i like this a lot. great poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by shroom

    Amazing poem.
    i despise men who only are out to 'score'.
    im sorry if this has happened to you in reality.
    :[
    -Kelliey

  • 17 years ago

    by Lozbi

    The way u hav written this poem is very good. keep up the good work.. & i feel 4 ur friend..
    .x

  • 17 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    Wow...I really liked this poem...Good Writting...Sorry about what happened..This was very powerful though...

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle

    Great poem!! awesome flow and so realistic loved it 5/5
    -Michelle

  • 17 years ago

    by heather

    Aww it was so good

  • 17 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    OMG IM CRYING RIGHT NOW I CANT BELIEVE THIS IM SO SAD I REALLY LOVE THIS POEM I REALLY CAN FEEL THE PAIN AND I CANT BELIEVE YOUR BACK!!!IM SO HAPPY I REALLY NEED SOME MOTIVATION TO WRITE A NEW POEM AND YOU INSPIRE ME!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Terryn

    That is sooo sad

  • 17 years ago

    by Shamia

    It gave me goosebumps...such a sad reality..beautifully written.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    Wow-this is so stark with such brutal undertones. Very sad and shocking. You have really created a tragic story here that reflects on the cruelty and selfishness of some people. Very thought-provoking and well written. Haunting, it really stays with you....

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 17 years ago

    by complicated situation

    A can completely relate to this poem it has happened to someone really close to me && a know they will never get over what has happened!

    Very well written && oh so true!

    Keep up thee good work && keep writting=] x

  • 17 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    The emotion in this poem was just amazing and the fact that it truely did happen makes it all that much more powerful...beautifully written as well...niice job!

    Brooke<3

  • 17 years ago

    by Leon

    That was good... be really interesting to see a version where you developed the characters more - the first four lines really invite a little more about the guy. and i'd change 'sneaky' to something more sinister. Will defo read more of your stuff.

  • 17 years ago

    by Timothy r

    Great writing indeed, you are sucha great friend for writing this. Unfortunately, this goes on way too much across the world. But your poem was brilliantly written. Timothy r