Dear Mama.

by Birgit   Jun 17, 2007


Dear Mama,
I know you're that star,
Shining every night,
So bright...

Dear Mama,
I know you're that voice in my head,
Telling me every night,
Don't be sad...

Dear Mama,
I know you're here,
You are, every night...

But dear Mama,
I don't know why you are gone..
But still whispering in my ear: It'll be OK.. all along
Dear Mama,
Why aren't you here?!
Why did God make Mamie disappear?
Why did he take you,
Did he not care?
Wait I hear something...

It's you, saying: It'll be OK, I swear.

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  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Wow sweet poem.
    Hope ur coping well.
    things happen 4 a reason and sometimes we never understand why I guess.
    stay strong

    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by the come back

    God has a purpose....

  • 17 years ago

    by Angela

    Omg.. this one actually made me cry!! i love how you always started it with dear mama.. it was soo touching. poems about death and loss always get me lol.. and this one certainly did.. good job!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    A touching poem, very real. Your poems have very strong endings. Your style and prose isn't quite developed yet, but you seem to have a clear idea as to what you want to say before you write a poem. You write to get messages across to people, to touch them.

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    This poem it beautiful, When I read the very last two lines and scrolled down to the last line of the poem, It touched me and it hit me so hard I just had to comment! God bless xx

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