My mum passed when i was 2
Its so hard.
I liked this, i know how you feel
stay strong
xoxbam

God might took your mom couse he needed a trustworthy angel, one who allways would look down on the ones she loved, and on the ones who would need her the most now...
And if your mom was half of what you are, then he had chosen the right one...

The poem is very good gitje, it sure is!! :D

I love this poem
i didnt know your mom was gone...
well i hope you feel better tho :)
*big hug*

Wow... I like this poem 5/5 the words flow together perfectly

Oh my.. the ending was really good. It added a twist in the poem :) good job.. The poem was sad but beautiful.. I haven't experience losing someone in my family.. But I think it's really depressing :( I feel sorry for you..

Just one suggestion for the poem :)
Telling me every night,
"Don't be sad..."
^^ But if you don't want to change it - Don't

5/5!

It was so sad, but it was a nicely written piece. nothing i could tell you could make it better, it is perfect. 5/5

Very nice and written for a specail reason. The last line is really provoking. You have captivated my attention Bergit. Keep it up. 5/5 all the way :)

Beautiful poem.
So sad, I'm sorry about your mom.
I think she's very proud of you.
Take care

Wow, this put tears in my eyes.
i'm so sorry for your loss.

This poem it beautiful, When I read the very last two lines and scrolled down to the last line of the poem, It touched me and it hit me so hard I just had to comment! God bless xx

A touching poem, very real. Your poems have very strong endings. Your style and prose isn't quite developed yet, but you seem to have a clear idea as to what you want to say before you write a poem. You write to get messages across to people, to touch them.

Omg.. this one actually made me cry!! i love how you always started it with dear mama.. it was soo touching. poems about death and loss always get me lol.. and this one certainly did.. good job!!

God has a purpose....

Wow sweet poem.
Hope ur coping well.
things happen 4 a reason and sometimes we never understand why I guess.
stay strong

xx