Comments : Dear Mama.

  • 17 years ago

    by Amba

    My mum passed when i was 2
    Its so hard.
    I liked this, i know how you feel
    stay strong
    xoxbam

  • 17 years ago

    by Zima Ultifera

    God might took your mom couse he needed a trustworthy angel, one who allways would look down on the ones she loved, and on the ones who would need her the most now...
    And if your mom was half of what you are, then he had chosen the right one...

    The poem is very good gitje, it sure is!! :D

  • 17 years ago

    by The Black Rose

    I love this poem
    i didnt know your mom was gone...
    well i hope you feel better tho :)
    *big hug*

  • 17 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    Wow... I like this poem 5/5 the words flow together perfectly

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Oh my.. the ending was really good. It added a twist in the poem :) good job.. The poem was sad but beautiful.. I haven't experience losing someone in my family.. But I think it's really depressing :( I feel sorry for you..

    Just one suggestion for the poem :)
    Telling me every night,
    "Don't be sad..."
    ^^ But if you don't want to change it - Don't

    5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    It was so sad, but it was a nicely written piece. nothing i could tell you could make it better, it is perfect. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very nice and written for a specail reason. The last line is really provoking. You have captivated my attention Bergit. Keep it up. 5/5 all the way :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    Beautiful poem.
    So sad, I'm sorry about your mom.
    I think she's very proud of you.
    Take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Dance Girlie

    Wow, this put tears in my eyes.
    i'm so sorry for your loss.

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    This poem it beautiful, When I read the very last two lines and scrolled down to the last line of the poem, It touched me and it hit me so hard I just had to comment! God bless xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    A touching poem, very real. Your poems have very strong endings. Your style and prose isn't quite developed yet, but you seem to have a clear idea as to what you want to say before you write a poem. You write to get messages across to people, to touch them.

  • 17 years ago

    by Angela

    Omg.. this one actually made me cry!! i love how you always started it with dear mama.. it was soo touching. poems about death and loss always get me lol.. and this one certainly did.. good job!!

  • 17 years ago

    by the come back

    God has a purpose....

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Wow sweet poem.
    Hope ur coping well.
    things happen 4 a reason and sometimes we never understand why I guess.
    stay strong

    xx