Killed by the dispair

by keep breathing   Jun 17, 2007


I see you all below me
But i still cant make a sound
I m floating high above you
Too dead to touch the ground
You think that I'm still down with you
Smiling standing there
But i have already died
Killed by the despair
It took my from my loved ones
But i didn't really care
Because i knew if i stayed
It will always still be there.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Raychil

    This was a very well written and emotional poem. You obviously have talent and you did a great job on this piece, I know how you feel and it's greta other people can also relate. This is a poem that you can greatly expand on as well. My only advice is to try and make it longer and go into more detail. Great job.
    <3Raych

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