Wondering

by Birgit   Jun 17, 2007


So where did we go wrong?
Wondering what my mistakes are,
My imperfections..
Wondering what your mistakes are,
Your imperfections..
Mistakes that we once used to take for granted,
used to ignore,
or used to laugh about.
Imperfections that we once used to like,
used to cherish,
or love.
Our mistakes and imperfections suddenly turned real,
We see them now,
But you don't ignore
You don't laugh
You don't cherish
You don't love them anymore.
You hate it and left, right through that door.
Left me here..
Crying, screaming; Make it soar.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Angela

    Thats beautiful!! you know the ups and downs of relationships soo well.. good on ya :)
    5/5 for catching what the ending of a friendship feels like !!
    so beautifully written is all your work
    <3 ang

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Uhm is this connected to your other poem? Well anyway another well penned poem, very emotional ^_^ Well done. I like how the poem started as a quesiton :)

  • 17 years ago

    by The Black Rose

    I like it, its deep and strong. it very emotional.
    but remember: No one is or can be perfect.

  • 17 years ago

    by Zima Ultifera

    For me, you will never change, lets hope this will be allright sometime...
    nice worg yet again!! :D

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