by bRiNgMeToLiFe Jun 17, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The walls are getting steeper |
Thanks for all the comments you guys :) |
I can relate, very sad and deep one. You wrote it greatly, nicely expressing your emotion. My favorite lines are: |
by john whalley
Very good :) |
by Crystal Gaze
"A crack of light shines in and I get a glimse of happiness |
by TamborineMan
Nice poem, a few typos aside it's an enjoyable read. |