by Gabby Jun 17, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
I think of u every night |
by Viridiana
Hey i just loved ur poem and it just told me in me face what i really feel about someone i know!! u got ur way with words and keep it up!! looking forward in reading more of ur poems!! |
Really good first poem..the only thing i'm gonna say is that maybe you should have combined the first 2 lines into 1? Because their basically stating the same thing. anywayz 5/ nice job |