Great write hunni! keep up the good work! this piece is very raw... and moving. 8/10

Very emotional don't suffer in silence there is always someone to help you.

Simple in your face and deep...you did a good job

p.s and u sed u were a poetry virgin! ur turning out to be a freaking god

Sad and emotional.
its really goood
i love it

Wow, this poem was very sad...but beautifully written. i loved it. great job!!