I am alone

by Fsams   Jun 17, 2007


The season has come to an end
The flowers are no more fresh
And it is a land of wilted roses
Where there isn't any fragrance

I was in the garden with you
And I often smelled your scent
But now I am left alone with
No hope and nourishment

I wish I could feel the smell again
Because I still love you the same
You are still the cure for all my pain
And till death, I'll cherish your name

Written by Fsams
17/06/2007
Sunday 16:10

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    You are not alone dear! With this piece I wanna be your best buddy! You are not just alone

    Tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    I've already commented this one..but i noticed something that i didnt point out.. this is really good.. i enjoyed reading it.. but

    "The flowers are no more fresh"

    ^^ in this line ... it didnt really make sense.. maybe something like this would sound better... "the flowers are no longer fresh"

    it just sounds smoother like that.

    overall i liked it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    It's funny how a simple and short poem such as this can hit a nerve in my heart and make my eyes tear up.I love this poem mainly because I feel it myself.5/5

    ---amber---

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I liked the simplicity of this poem. You got right to the point, and told a story without any fancy vocabulary. Something about the last stanza struck me as odd, I think it may be that "same" and "pain" sound similar... but other than that, really nice poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    I loved this one! (you don't need to comment any more of mine unless you want to, this title caught my interest) I thought it was very well written and was well expressed for how short it was.

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