THE FEELING OF LOSS

by Lozbi   Jun 17, 2007


In Loving Memory of Mervyn George Coombes

7th March 1945 - 13th December 2006

"Bob"

THE FEELING OF LOSS

i didnt believe it

that day dad called

to tell me the news

that you were gone

my head was spinning

with fear of our loss

i was so confused

that i fell to the floor in shock

five days had past

as i got in the car

i didnt know what to expect

but i didnt think it would be so hard

that day i seen you

resting in peace

i couldnt even speak

it was just so hard to believe

its been a month now

and it still hurts so bad

to think that you're not here

Poppy Bob, i miss you so much...

By Loren McCormack

13.01.2007

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  • 16 years ago

    by Meghan

    Great poem... 5/5..

  • 17 years ago

    by mathew

    Very good poem..... amazing thats a 5 from me too

  • 17 years ago

    by Diana

    I've been throught
    i'm sorry
    its a good poem
    =]

  • 17 years ago

    by enigmatic_prey

    That is really touching...i'll give you 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    I'm so sorry for your loss,
    its a wonderful poem, strong emotion and the end was very sad, 5/5
    take care,
    stephanie