Awwwwwwwwww, i dont know what to say....awwwwwwww, i love it xxxxxxxx

Beautiful and heartfelt poem. I believe the ones we love are looking down on us and guiding us, and im sure your dad's looking down on you and feeling very proud of his talented child. Love the poem x

That was a great poem. Very nicely expressed. Sad that you lost your dad - but Im sure he knew you loved him from the way you described him in your piece.

A very nice poem, combine the third and fourth stanza's and it'll be perfect

I am sorry for your loss and your father would be proud of your writing skills may he always shine forever.

Incredible i dunno what else to say makes you reflect on your own life brilliant i lol i dunno there arent really enough words! funny how a poet will say that

Awwww!I am so sorry for your loss.You are an incredible writer.Keep it up!5/5

<3Amber

This is so sad 5/5

I love this one! i can relate to it. i lost my dad when i was 6..

Awwww ...
a reallly sad poem.
im sure your dad knew you loved him. =]
this is a really nice piece.
wish me and my dad were close

xo.louii