Feeling the Pain of a Heart Break

by Lozbi   Jun 17, 2007


Feeling the Pain of a Heart Break

i thought it was forever
i know you thought so too
you said your feelings had changed
there was nothing i could do
it was hard to say goodbye
not to the memories we shared
but to the love and happiness
and the way that you cared
months have passed by
and i still feel the same way
i'm broken and confused
why didn't you just stay?
the answer to that question
i know very so well
but i can't yet accept it
i just wanna hide in my shell
for all the tears i cry
are wishing you were with me
i'm still in love with you
and always will be

By Loren McCormack
15th January, 2007

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  • 16 years ago

    by fakesmile

    A well written poem! flawless wat i can?! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by stacey pearce

    Wow good poem 5/5

    stacey xoxox

  • 17 years ago

    by Bexx

    I've gone through this before and I thought this piece conveyed the emotions very well. Keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by enigmatic_prey

    That was a amazing

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    I personally dislike love/ break up type of poetry, but in this piece emotions are well expressed.
    You should capitalize i (I).