by Lozbi Jun 17, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
What if it hurts all over again |
by Brittany C
I really loved this one. I can relate to all to well. I gave it a 5/5. Because you deserved it. |
Great poem, every stanza is well written. It has really good flow. |
by Mezmeryz
Aww this poem is so sweet =] at the beginning its sad, and i can feel the emotions just flowing right through your lines, then the final stanza just made me smile. hopefully you'll be happy =] |
by Vanessa
Although the emotion is strong, and deep and the flow is good, I can only see one thing that could be improved, the shortcuts, should be taken out, it makes the poem easier to follow, and makes the flow better when you spell out the entire word, plus it looks more professional with the word spelled out. This is just a sugestion, the poem still reads great just the way you wrote it. 5/5 |
by Neta
I like this one the most.... |