This is excellent. I mean really good. One question: r u the caring friend or the "friend"

It was a really good poem = ] i liked the flow and everything

Wow, I see so much confusion in this piece. I see the narrator kind of passive-agressively wanting to find love, but is scared to be hurt. It is very conflicting and very entertaining.

The rhyme scheme is great in this one, with a great flow.

I don't have anything to dissagree on with this poem. Good job.

I like this one the most....
its the one i can mostly relate to
good job

Although the emotion is strong, and deep and the flow is good, I can only see one thing that could be improved, the shortcuts, should be taken out, it makes the poem easier to follow, and makes the flow better when you spell out the entire word, plus it looks more professional with the word spelled out. This is just a sugestion, the poem still reads great just the way you wrote it. 5/5

Aww this poem is so sweet =] at the beginning its sad, and i can feel the emotions just flowing right through your lines, then the final stanza just made me smile. hopefully you'll be happy =]
nuff luv, keep writing xx

Great poem, every stanza is well written. It has really good flow.
You have one mistake: In second stanza "Shes" should be she's.
5/5

I really loved this one. I can relate to all to well. I gave it a 5/5. Because you deserved it.