by Lozbi Jun 17, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
When she was five |
by T babyluv
This iz great itz lik readen a story..parents juz don know wat kind of effect they have on there children this tells alot |
Such a moving poem. I can totally relate to it. It's so sad, I can feel all the emotion put in it. Great piece!! 5/5 dear. |
Wow, my parents are divorced too. i also hate my step-mom. i don't know all of your emotions, but i do know of the hating the person your dad loves and the fight for his attention. but anyway, we've learned to put that emotion into artwork. great job! 5/5! |
You definitely, definitely, definitely have real poetry talent! Every poem you write is mind blowing and i love every single one of them, but this is my fav. |
I love your work, you really write some deep stuff. |