by CHOKE
Wow, that's a horrible thing to do. (whether it was done by a girl or a guy) |
Awww...once again it was lovely...i love depressing poems that are so pretty that you can't really be too depressed after reading it...this was one of those... |
by Goran Rahim
Another great poem with a sad tone, yet again you have successfuly wrote a great poem. |
by XcrissyX
I love this poem aswell! your goin in my fav writrers...can you read some of mine pleae and comment and tell me how to improve it?? |
by Genna
This was a great poem! 5/5! |
by Wallace
Excellent, truly amazing. The flow was perfect and it was a joy to read. Very good, keep it up. |
by Tiffany
Amazing is the only word that I can say for this poem.....Great Job!!! Honestly it hit me really hard!!! Excellently wrote!! |
by heather
Its so good ! 5/5 this was my fav part i really liked your word choice . |
by Simply Me
This was beautiful i loved it 5/5 |
by grease
This happened to me too, thas why i understand it so well it absolutley awesome!! |
by Reshia
OMG THAT WAS AMAZING!!!! |
by Boy
Your poem was awesome. but believe me it was sch a sad poem. i loved the way you have explained your feelings. aggressive. i will give you 5/5 |
by Sherri
That is good.Be my friend. |
by Sabree
Such agony and torment that lies within your withered ways...this poem speaks wonders and projects all of that pain. I am unsure of what to really say about it. It is not my favorite of yours, but still wonderous all the same. You are an amazing poet. I have gone through similar things with both a boy and a girl...they both shattered my dreams tore out my heart and left me an empty shell. However i did move on...mainly because of poetry. I can see that you can do the same with your poetry...that much is clear. I will give you a 4.5/5 for this poem. Keep up the good work, do not dissapoint me for i look up to your poetry highly. Someday i aspire to have the level of emotion in my poetry as you do. If you get the chance please check out some of mine...they might not be very good, but i need the critisim. Much obliged whether you do or not. Excellent poem...keep it up. |
Babe that was beautiful.. |
by Vanessa
I can't stop reading your poems this is my third one and i'm so amazed. You truly are a wonderful writer nice sad poem. Take care, Vanessa |
Ohhhh!!!!!!! that was sooooooo great!! how do you do it!!! your the best writer ever!! |
Wow! great poem! |
Wow great poem.... this is basically my life story i no longer let people get close to me ive been hurt to much by them walking away. You did a great job 5/5 |
Wow |