Red ink

by bleeding limegrenn   Jun 17, 2007


Great personality
great sense of humor
why wouldn't any one like him
with no where to turn,no where to run
he did what he could
he headed for the bathroom to droned his sorrow in read ink

to scared to come out
for what the others will think
so once more he makes that red ink

but this time its to much to Handel
he collapse with no one to here
that red ink drips with no fear

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  • 17 years ago

    by Night Walker

    I love it...it was very nicley written...

    Night Walker

  • 17 years ago

    by ganjaru

    Wow great!

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    The poem is excellent with nice use of vocabulary. I found some mistakes in this piece. You cant make a past infinitive. I mean like " to droned" and in "to scared" i think you mean to say too scared.

    Despite these meager things its worth 5/5