Great poem! it reflects true life stories!
and i love the flow!

great job 5/5

Really good, powerful ending which tied everything together and gave the poem meaning.
my only criticism the line about, what went in came right out, really reminded me of someone going for a poo lol. i know you meant like making herself sick, but the connotations were too strong to ignore.
other than that really well worded, well done
xx

Amazing job!!! very powerful.
amanda

Great poem.
Powerful, Especially the last 2 lines, As they speak the complete truth.
I enjoyed reading it, & im sure many others do too beacuse they feel they can relate.
Good work.
Bec.x

Woah. where do you get your talent?? that was amazing. i loved it. keep up the good work. 5/5

Wow, this was an amazing poem i must say.
it was very into depth as well as intriguing and capturative. i wouldn't change a thing :)
5/5 love.

Wow that was sooo good! so many people are facing this problem today, and I think that a lot of people can relate to this poem... 5/5 from me, and you are such an amazing writer... keep up the great work!

Wow , what a great poem
loved the way it flowed and the truth it captured
keep it up

So, she died because of diet? ^^
How tragic.. ><
I like your idea.
It flows nicely too..
Wonderful poem.. ^^

You created a poem we can all relate to...and its so captivating to the audience...well done...it gets the message accross and its in the news alot x greatly expressive poem. well done. 5/5