This poem was honestly of amazement. The emotion of which you portrayed throughout such love poem was really strong, deep and capturing. I believe you go deep into your heart and soul to produce poems such to this standard. The way you express how you feel and all together the way you express anything is truely stunning. The flow was flawless beyond explanation. I really am speechless. Well done with writing this beautifuly sad piece.

~mel

Stephen, I would like to say thankyou for commenting on my poem. It really does mean alot to me. Also Thankyou for pointing out those few errors throughout the poem. I have edited the piece now. =)
I'm glad you actually noticed them errors because therefor I know you read the poem through unlike alot of people. You truely are amazing.

Wow, this was an amazing poem mate :)
it was so into depth and i was captured in it from the very beginning. i give you 5/5 deffinately :)

Awww...it's beautiful...i love it...i'm jealous because i wish i'd wrote it :)....It makes me wish i had someone like that....absolutely beautiful...that's all i can think to say...thank you for writing such a beautiful poem...it cheered me up when i was kinda blue...
Jonda Beth

This was another great write by you, you have done a great job as always..
your words are so inspiring and you have been a great teachers to those who want to learn the art of poetry. keep it up.

This poem was very well written.It was really touching.You have captured the emotions really deep and strong.The flow was good and each stanza was very well written!!
good job in this piece!!
best wishes
and take care.

Once again you leave me speechless. Your poetry is of the utmost level of superiority. This is yet another one that just goes right to your heart and soul. It makes you think not only of love but of heartbreak. It makes you try your best to grasp the severe tradgedy that is unfolding upon your withered soul..yet it makes you see the beauty of the love which surrounds you. Your poem ejects such impecable emotion and passion that it makes you want nothing more than to possess that sort of way. Such emotion that i was able to draw from this poem...a rare thing to find. When i read your poem...i feel a strange thing, i feel content. The love that is in this poem is immense and makes me almost sad in a way. You have impecable talent and i know that you will go far. I wish only that i could say more about this poem...but i am left practically speechless. Do not give up on the art of literature...it is your calling clearly. I shall give you yet another 5/5!

-Sabree

How do you do it? Your poetry is amazing. If someone would write a poem like this one dedicated to me, i would fall in love instantly. You have a way with words that makes me feel a little weird but really good. nice poem you did a really god job.